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Some good use of space Georgie. I also like the way you have focussed on E Coli and used the word 'save' as emotive language. I was wondering though might you swap the two pieces of text at the bottom around?
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Some good use of space Georgie. I also like the way you have focussed on E Coli and used the word 'save' as emotive language. I was wondering though might you swap the two pieces of text at the bottom around?
ReplyDeleteThank you for your great comment Mr.k I will take that advice on board and I agree that I should swap them around.
ReplyDeleteNice poster! I like the e coli sign. Maybe you should put a photo where there is space.
ReplyDeleteGreat Facts and information about E.Coli and your pictures are good quality. But I reckon that you might need a few more quality pictures.
ReplyDeleteGreat poster!! I really like the facts you have. maybe you could make those images bigger
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