Tuesday, 14 August 2018

Save the Rere rockslide

5 comments:

  1. Some good use of space Georgie. I also like the way you have focussed on E Coli and used the word 'save' as emotive language. I was wondering though might you swap the two pieces of text at the bottom around?

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  2. Thank you for your great comment Mr.k I will take that advice on board and I agree that I should swap them around.

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  3. Nice poster! I like the e coli sign. Maybe you should put a photo where there is space.

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  4. Great Facts and information about E.Coli and your pictures are good quality. But I reckon that you might need a few more quality pictures.

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  5. Great poster!! I really like the facts you have. maybe you could make those images bigger

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